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Post by Maxwell 7/28/2014, 2:11 am

(This story is sort of a Prologue to Pokemon Colosseum. Slightly different opening then the base getting blown up and Wes riding off into the sunset like a BAMF)

Loka and a male with blonde hair, gold eyes, and a white marking across his face raced through the collapsing enemy base. He ran in front of her, grasping her hand tightly as they weaved through the hall of falling stone and pipes. The explosives these two teenagers had set had detonated prematurely, costing them precious minutes.

"Wes! Look out!"

The girl slammed into Wes, knocking him out of the way as a pointed rock pierced her upper back, as smaller bits ricocheted off the ground into her left eye. Loka let out a roar of pain as she collapsed to the ground. Her sleeve caught on some exposed razor wire and revealed a now broken snag machine.

"Loka... Where did you get that?!" Wes asked, pulling his injured friend from the rubble and setting her against the rock pile. Loka smiled weakly and lifted the mechanized arm.

"R-remember that prototype that w-went missin'...?"

"That was you?! And you walked around the base completely undetected?!"

Loka nodded, then began coughing violently. Blood sprayed from her mouth and leaked from the wound in her chest. Wes went to pull the stone from his friend, but her hands gently met his.

"D-don't... It's the only thing t-thats keepin' me alive..." Loka reached to her leg pouch and pulled two pokeballs, then struggled to remove her belt. Wes caught a glimpse of what looked like Lucarionite in the buckle. "Take these... I n-need you to find-" She erupted into another coughing fit.

Both Wes and Loka heard the cracking sound that came from her ribs. She wouldn't be conscious much longer.

"I need you t-to find Eragon..." She finally managed to get her belt off and she handed that to Wes as well. "Tell 'em... t-the Ho-Oh... is in ashes..."

"Who's Eragon? What does that mean?"

Loka went into another coughing fit as she grasped Wes's hand tightly.

"Hurry..." She weakly pointed to the east as she turned to look down the hall. CIPHER members were coming down the hall, weapons drawn. "Go now... Genetics r-room.... Don't let 'em get away with this....."

Her eyes fluttered shut. The two pokeballs that she had handed to Wes flew open as a Houndoom and a Mightyena appeared. They looked at Wes and barked, ready to defend him; they had heard everything that Loka said. The human and pokemon ran off in the direction Loka pointed to. 

"Please... Stay alive..." Wes spoke to himself as he looked back.

The CIPHER members had Loka surrounded. The picked her up and loaded her onto the back of an Avalugg that had a blanket covering it's back. Loka screamed in pain, gripping the blanket as she was carried away.

Loka woke up to blinding lights and a bandaged chest and a patch over her left eye. She weakly sit up but immediately fell back pain searing through her body. Mightyena, who was resting at the foot of the hospital bed, looked at her as she felt the patch over her eye. She would never see out of that eye again.

Wes was nowhere to be seen. 

"Blitz... Did he leave a note..." She whispered to the Houndoom, that was gently laid across her lap. It looked at her and growled lowly, proudly sticking out it's chest. Loka opened the little skull on it's chest and a piece of paper fell out. It was a bit burned and had some blood on it, but it was still readable.


'Loka,


I found Eragon. I had to snag him, but he came to his senses once he knew what had happened to you. He is currently traveling to a safer region, and so am I. I'm sorry that it had to be this way.


-Wes'


Loka gripped the paper with her trembling hands. Tears fell onto her covered lap as she stuck the note back in the skull. Her only friends left her here...
Taking several deep breaths, she reached for her pokegear and saw she had several missed calls. One was from her family, and her dad didn't seem to happy.

'We heard about what had happened to that CIPHER base, and we were hoping that you didn't go near them like we told you to. What would Rizu think if you died? You know how attached to you he is! You're his ONLY sister! You're coming back to Hoenn as soon as you're able to move, and you're never going to adventure again. Understand?'

Loka hung her head, knowing her father was right. She looked at the bandage on her chest and sighed. She had no Idea how she survived, but she now had a new set of goals; Track down Wes and Eragon.

When she was well enough, Loka returned home. Rizu frowned, then cried, the smiled happily. Loka couldn't help but smile. He was only 4 years younger then her...

She told her little brother her story, showed her all the scars and her missing eye, then told him she was never going to stop adventuring, and that he should start.

"When are you leaving again?" he asked her.

"Next week. I'll be going to Kanto, seeing as my work in Orre is finally done."

"When I can adventure, I'll be sure to meet up with you!"

The two smiled at each other.

The next week, despite her father's raging and her mother's tears, Loka boarded the ship to Kanto. She now donned the colors and a similar style to Houndoom, as well as a patch over her left eye. Everyone stayed out of her way, and those who didn't got cracked with her whip. 

She never dared to use it on her own pokemon, but she ended up teaching them to do different things when they heard certain cracks of the whip.
Loka would reach her goals one way or another, and she didn't care how anymore.


And So, Rizu went on to mug people like an asshole (jk/jk), and Loka now travels with a small group of Newer Trainers.
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Post by Rocky 7/29/2014, 3:27 am

So that's what happened to her!
Dammit, I'm forming sympathy for a character that could possibly die, again...  STAHP

At least she kept a solid relationship with her brother, which makes sense from that one post in the RP.  ^^

I definitely dig the reference to Colosseum, since it was underdeveloped game in the franchise - and up until now I had no idea that the protag's name was Wesley - but Loka certainly seems more experienced in danger zone than I thought!

I'm curious to know who Eragon is and if we will ever see it and Wes in the story~  ^_'

I really did like this and I really think we all should try some of this in the future, especially for minor characters that we just haven't had time to know more about yet, or for characters to which we don't have time to focus on the backstory of.  Great job, PA Luna~!
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Post by Maxwell 8/19/2014, 4:24 pm

Sorry to reply so late to this, and thank you! Feel free to do this with your characters; it will not only provide depth to them, but it will help me with moving you all along in the story! 

As for Eragon and Wes... Yeah, you'll meet them. Not in the ways that you'd expect, but you'll meet 'em!

Also, if there are any events you all want me to add into the RP, don't hesitate to ask!
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Post by Star Phoenix 8/29/2014, 9:47 pm

Intense stuff! Colosseum was my second favorite spinoff game, after Mystery Dungeon. It's pretty freaking cool to see you incorporating it into the BtTG canon like this!

Actually... re-reading this story... Will "Pokemon Ranger" or other spinoff games have an impact on BtTG?
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Post by Maxwell 8/29/2014, 10:18 pm

Actually, yes. You will meet Rangers and have the opportunities to go to the regions used in the ranger games as well as the "snagger series."

So all regions are available.
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Post by Rocky 8/29/2014, 10:45 pm

According to recent information and collected data (as well as very humorous depictions and accidental interpretations) we've discovered that Loka also used to be a ranger.

She used to 'practice snag' Pokemon through herding methods, particularly with a mount.

This is all I am disclosing.  ^^  (and also all I know)
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Post by Maxwell 8/29/2014, 10:59 pm

This, is also true. I'll probably make a back story behind the backstory. Razz
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Post by Star Phoenix 8/29/2014, 11:22 pm

Quite an interesting life that Loka's led, then!
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Post by Maxwell 8/30/2014, 12:05 am

xD yeah. Too bad the gave it up for a life of crime, then gave up the life of crime to redeem herself! Whose to say she wont give that up? Razz


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